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Old 10-09-2008, 07:29 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Fallen Out Of Love

So I have only just wrote this. However it is how i feel about that day that Glenn and myself broke up. It's my out look on it.


She stood on the edge of the knife,
Scared that she would fall,
Unsure of what she really wanted,
She couldn't handle anymore.
Afraid to look down to the bottom,
Her balance giving way,
She had a difficult choice to make,
Cos you wanted her to stay.
She was going to break your heart,
She didn't want to be here,
Scared but sure she had fallen out of love,
When you just wanted her near.
How could this have happened now?
How could she out grow you?
It was time to start moving on,
You could feel that too.
She packed her bags and drove away,
She knew that this was right,
No longer could she make you happy,
No longer could she fight.
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Old 10-09-2008, 03:00 PM   #2 (permalink)
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wow, poems like that always give me chills when it's not me writing it..weird how that works
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that means alot to me
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"Suddenly, this is all too hard. I'm tired of putting up walls. I want someone with the strength and the honesty to knock them down."
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