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Old 08-26-2008, 12:28 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Discovered Love

The dice was loaded from the start,
and just looking at you made a stir in my hear,
the prettiest stranger i had ever met,
with a smile that i will never forget.

I have seen many girls,
but i know that you are the best,
because you're the one one,
that shines out from the rest.

i feel so happy that we've met,
because you are perfect in my eyes,
so beautiful and full of life,
an angel in disguise.

Even though i've known you for such a short time,
i think of the times ive spent with you,
and i lay here writing this,
falling more in love with you.

olivia you are the best thing for me
and every day with you
is a day that i will never forget
and i will forever be here for you.

i loved you yesterday
i love you today
and i will love you tommorow


I wrote this for a mate to give to a girl he liked, but its really written about that girls best friend......
pitty i could never tell her i wrote it.
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Old 08-26-2008, 12:41 AM   #2 (permalink)
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why did you tell her??? omg... it's just so sweet....
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i didnt tell her....
i couldnt tell her because my friend gave this poem to the girl he liked.
he asked me to write it for the girl he liked and i just cant write something for some one i dont have feelings for.
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I know the feeling...

thats sad... :(

well the poem is amazing
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