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Old 08-11-2008, 05:25 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Ok - this is very fluid in form. Not the best thing I've ever written, but it pretty much captures my relationship with the exasco forumn. Cheers.

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In a darkened void of deafening silence and broken promises, a little girl screams at the black for help… yet bites all that approach.

No one listens

Why should they?

Years pass and the little girl is now a little adult in a little world that thinks it’s big.
The black creeps in the edge of her vision, but she is kept from dwelling.

She no longer screams but silent sobs choke her dreams.

She clutches the chards of hope which is those precious.

Tight in her hand

They cut deep. To feel is wondrous - Refreshing against the numb.

An outlet: She wants to save others.

To be there for those at the beginning of the black

middle

and end.

Because she know the void and it hurts.
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Old 08-17-2008, 09:55 AM   #2 (permalink)
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wow.... That was great..

And i feel just like that...
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Old 08-17-2008, 09:57 PM   #3 (permalink)
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they are some very strong words,
good poem
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Old 08-19-2008, 04:12 AM   #4 (permalink)
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beautiful... i like it and i can relate
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you have such a gift of expression
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Old 08-22-2008, 05:18 AM   #6 (permalink)
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It was just me typing - random typing. I really loved the visual image of clutching 'love' in your hand so tight in your hand that its cuts. It really speaks to my family situiation lately - holding their comfort so close that it hurts and becomes quite negative.

Thanks everyone for the kind words - I written a lot of poetry in the past and its all bound up in a little notebook in my cupboard waiting to be discovered. lol.
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Old 08-24-2008, 02:48 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Very nice. A touching tribute to a wonderful site.
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