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Old 08-01-2008, 01:24 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Just a poem

I remember shit man, it’s a curse man
It hurts man, it only seems to get worse man
I am not ready to ride in a hearse man
Though thoughts replay like the sun rises each day
Driving me crazy I wonder why it has to be this way
I’m wondering why you speak to me that way
Fed up, I picked my head up and I’m scheming
The only thing that got me through depression was dreaming
And a little tweaking because that beats sleeping
No more pill popping, if I could stop I wouldn’t be stopping
I flopped before, I won’t continue flopping
Some might say my poetry got sloppy, but Poppy
Tell these folks to leave me alone, or pop me
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Old 08-02-2008, 04:42 AM   #2 (permalink)
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i really like this one... has great rhyme, a bit like a rap song..
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Old 08-02-2008, 09:08 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I have always found your poetry such an interesting thing to read, its like you can almost see into your mind for a small moment there.

Long time no speak, how have you been?
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