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Old 06-30-2008, 10:37 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Emily

The dice was loaded from the start,
And just looking at you made a stir in my heart.
The prettiest stranger I had ever met,
With a smile that I could never forget.

You were just so amazing,
I couldn’t believe that you were talking to me,
And that right then you were all mine,
You blinded me from what I could actually see.

You were so innocent,
But at the same time a devil in disguise,
You acted so vulnerable and scared,
But you weren’t afraid to tear out my eyes.

Two days past and I was left with a bad taste,
Still confused over what had happened to me,
You played your head games,
But finally I can see.

You were perfect in every way for me,
I wasn’t going to hurt you or run away,
Just be there to love you,
But I figured that there was no point to stay.

So this is my last words
I thought you were everything
But I won’t hang around any more
Because it was all just a fling.
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Old 07-01-2008, 11:34 PM   #2 (permalink)
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ahh. as i said before...beautiful but sad
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and yet so very true....
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Old 07-16-2008, 11:45 PM   #3 (permalink)
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sad...it really is but its a moving poem too. From pain comes beauty
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