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Old 04-11-2008, 03:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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she stands in the doorway
with her wrist bleeding red
shes drowning in sorrow
soon she'll be dead.

the clock ticks louder
her times almost out
she starts crying
she knows without a doubt

as the crimson blood seeps
she looks up above
"how could you let me do this?"
"why'd i cut so deep"

the rain starts to pour
on her solid pale face
she gives up her body
and finds a better place
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ill draw a picture, a picture on my rist, ill draw it with a razor, ill draw it with a twist, and as i draw this picutre, a fountain will appear and as the fountain starts to flow all my problems will disappear
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Old 07-16-2008, 11:51 PM   #2 (permalink)
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its really original...i cant stop reading ur work.
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Old 07-21-2008, 10:19 PM   #3 (permalink)
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this is really sad.. :(
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Old 07-30-2008, 12:11 AM   #4 (permalink)
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beautifully dark.... i kno the feeling behind this.... good job
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thank you for all your comments...it encourages me to write more thx again
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