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Old 03-17-2008, 08:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
I scream, you dont notice
 
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Lonely girl

She was a lonely girl
All alone in her mind
Even in groups of people
She was just one of a kind

When surrounded by noise
With fun and laughter too
She feels like crying inside
But it will never show through

No fun in her freedom
There’s no joy in going out
Only lies when she smiles
The just don’t know what its about

So just smile to this girl
And just brush back her hair
Cos you know that girl is you
So please just know that I care.
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Old 07-16-2008, 11:50 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i dont even remember writing this.
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