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Old 02-19-2008, 03:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
I scream, you dont notice
 
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I’m a pretty girl
And boys do like me
But do they like me
For who I am

I'm just so empty
Deep down inside me
And so I want them
To make me whole

But with every boy
That’s comes and passes
I'm left just feeling
Numb and worse

I want to feel loved
Not just to be used
Used and left again
Until they want some love
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Old 02-27-2008, 05:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Wow, sweety...
I can't tell you how many times i've felt like this...
awesome poem, I love it!
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Old 02-27-2008, 05:36 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 03-04-2008, 09:58 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Dont feel let down, at our age things come and go fast.
when you 20 and older things start to get a little more serious.
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