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Old 02-14-2008, 08:06 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Will you be my valentine?
Will you be my valentine?
My dearest Samia
I think the world of you
You are a star in the night’s sky
No beauty has ever been so true

I would move heavens and earth
Just to see you smile
our friendship means more than the entire universe
so it’s all worthwhile

I don’t know what I would do
if one day you weren’t there
because I need you every day
because I love the moments that we share

Although my days are numbered
You will always have a place in my heart
I am going to miss you deeply
while we live apart

So to my special girl
I say this one last thing
Everything you do
Is the reason why I love you.
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Old 02-14-2008, 12:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Aw, that's beautiful Mark.
Nice one. I like the rhyming, it's not perfect, but that's what makes it work.
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So, please, please, please, let me get what I want this time


Heroin, be the death of me,
Heroin, its my wife and its my life,
Then I'm better off dead.

And I guess I just don't know.
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Old 02-15-2008, 05:19 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hehe, awesome one Mark, was that the one that you were working on...well one of the ones
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Old 02-15-2008, 05:39 AM   #4 (permalink)
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thanks, she really liked it.
and didnt put me like $30 out of pocket for flowers.. cause im broke right now.
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