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Old 01-03-2008, 11:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
I scream, you dont notice
 
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stupid little poem

I scream
Hear me
Please
I’m begging

Watch this
Its blood
Serious
Its real

Catch me
Im falling
Actually
Just don’t.
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Old 01-04-2008, 12:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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it's good

it's deep

and it scares me a little

please be careful

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Old 02-15-2008, 12:37 AM   #3 (permalink)
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wow... it's good... it's sad and it made me think of the words "i'm fine" with a scared little girl hiding behind them...

are you ok???
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Old 02-16-2008, 05:32 PM   #4 (permalink)
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to be honest nah not really but there is nothin to be done xxx
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