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Old 12-15-2007, 11:23 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I scream again
What the hell is wrong with me
Why can I see
That all I am is nothing
That all I can feel is empty
Leave me be to bleed
Leave me be to die
But I can't
I am not strong enough to end it all

Trapt in my head
Screaming wolds you'll never hear
Why can I say them out loud
Trapt by my scars
The wounds you'll never understand
Trapt by the people
How can they say that they understand

Why cant I run?
Why cant I hide?
Am I to weak?
Can I only cry
For the sake of nothing
I am here
All alone
Leave me be
Let me die in peace

I will stay here
Trapt in this light world
For when the darkness holds me
I can be free
And that is why you all
Keep me
TRAPT!!!!!!
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Old 12-16-2007, 02:23 AM   #2 (permalink)
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i like this, you can feel the emotions dripping from it.

Do you base your poems on how you are feeling when you write them or is it just something you wrote about?

either way i like it very much
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Old 12-18-2007, 06:53 AM   #3 (permalink)
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i based this one on my resent emotional problems and work... welcome to a day in retail sales...

thank you for the compliment
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Old 12-19-2007, 02:23 AM   #4 (permalink)
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it's so sad.
you better not be hurting yourself missy. i will find you and make you eat pizza and spill your guts about everything going on.

I really like this poem.
But i'm also really worried about you.
I didn't know it was bad. I'm sorry i wasn't there for you.
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I am not hurting myself don't worry I have just been really down lately been sick and work been so very quite but I am doing better.
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