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Old 12-14-2007, 03:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Bitter sweet love

Shows encircle
Tears fall yet again
A new scar to hide
A new death of hope

Round and round
As my life goes
I want nothing
But I want you
I feel pain but have nothing

I loved you… My Damon
I bleed for you now
Though you don’t want me
I cry for you
Though you care not

I wanted for you
You never cared
I was just there
I was breaking in you eyes
Yet it didn’t matter
I was just your pain

As the ancient blade severed
The blood released the pain
Yet the longing remained
Why? Tell me now
Why do I want for you when
I am nothing to you

Round and round
The world spins
I need for nothing
But I need you
I feel alone but there are people here

My bittersweet life
Pain eased by blood
Hope severed by a blade
A heart broken by you…
By my Damon
By my bittersweet lover….

This is an old song I wrote. Hope you like.
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Old 12-19-2007, 02:50 AM   #2 (permalink)
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hello Mr Damon... I remember you well...

this is so sad and so lonely. it's beautiful sarah....
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Old 12-19-2007, 11:10 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I know it's one of my first poems so i love it so very much. I thought I would put it up.
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