short Angry poem - strong language

Broken_mind · 05-14-2007, 06:16 PM

You stupid tart

Swear to god u stupid whore
Just listen to what I’m saying
If you act like that and never look
You wont see the games their playing

Pull down your top a little more
And pull your skirt up higher
Just flaunt your goods u little tart
And soon you’ll find a buyer

Just stay away from those I love
I don’t want to fucking see you
With your slimy greasy little smile
It will never be just you two.

If you come close to him again
I swear I’ll fucking break you
We used to be such good close friends
But you and me are through

wrlit_sists · 05-14-2007, 10:55 PM

*hugs* i think i know who this is about?

it's good

i hope you're ok xxxxx

Broken_mind · 05-15-2007, 12:06 PM

lol yeh rach it is im ok she might not be tho lol x

Betsybug0 · 05-27-2007, 03:38 AM

Mmmm... picture this: a goth girl pointing with her bony fingers at "the slut". Its a nice image.

Broken_mind · 05-29-2007, 04:03 PM

lol i aint a goth girl

Betsybug0 · 05-30-2007, 12:12 AM

So? It's called death of the author, honey.

Broken_mind · 05-31-2007, 12:36 PM

rite thn...

Almost-Insane · 05-31-2007, 12:57 PM

tht sounds wee bit of a threat actually...gd poem tho

Broken_mind · 05-31-2007, 12:59 PM

it was in the mood i was in lol

Almost-Insane · 05-31-2007, 01:06 PM

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So? It's called death of the author, honey.

i meant tht sounded like a threat lol

Broken_mind · 05-31-2007, 02:16 PM

ohhh im confused by that comment from besty

Betsybug0 · 05-31-2007, 03:22 PM

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Almost-Insane · 05-31-2007, 04:04 PM

i still dont get it

Betsybug0 · 05-31-2007, 08:00 PM

Okay well, it's sort of like this. Once the writer/artist/creator submits something and presents it to someone else, it dosen't matter what the creator was attempting to protray, because everything is open to interpretation. For example, a picture of a nude guy could be seen as really pretty or really vile, it means something different to everyone. Once the peice is thrown out there, different people with come to different conclusions. Sort of like... when someone see's cuts on another, (and if they personally cut) they might assume the person cuts themselves, but another person might just think a cat went crazy on their arm.

Almost-Insane · 05-31-2007, 08:24 PM

ahhh thts fair enough